Tuesday, November 30, 2010

The Beginning


It was a cold, crisp autumn day and the sun was shining over all of Waterford. Addy dashed to her friend Erin's house. She had chest length straight dark brown hair, brown eyes, and lots of freckles. She was wearing her favorite pair of dark - not black - skinny jeans, a gray peacoat, a olive green scarf, and tall brown Ugg boots. When Addy rang Erin's doorbell, Erin appeared, looking the same as usual, with short wavy dirty blonde hair, hazel eyes, and emerald green glasses. She was wearing medium wash skinny jeans, an orange Hollister T-shirt with a long sleeve brown shirt under it, and black boots. As they scampered outside, they noticed a colossal brick castle.
"Whoa," gasped Addy, gazing in awe at the monstropolous domain. Erin also stared at the imposing fortress in amazement. Addy, the more daring one of the two, darted through the giant metal gate in front of the castle and into its dimly lit interior. Erin, not wanting to be left behind, followed Addy at a quick pace. The two were astonished at the grand foyer of the castle and were eager to explore more..............

3 comments:

  1. i was just viewing my blog one day when i hit next blog and this is what came up so i decided to take a look!!!!!! When i started read it i thought it was great, the detail was great and whoever wrote it is defidentaly going places!!!

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  2. kay so this blog is really cool and whoever wrote this - probably erin and addy - are really good writers. they come up with good words i think. and also it was cool and i can't wait for what part of the story comes next...what happens in the castle erin and addy?!?!? please post!

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  3. ya know i think that those people above are kinda trying to advertise their blog or they have the same names as the people making it. but even if they are trying to advertise it is true what they said! i love this blog even if it is short so far. they need to post more.

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